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Jul 25, 2005 3:48:56 GMT -5
Post by Ritsu Souma on Jul 25, 2005 3:48:56 GMT -5
I wanted my own turn in putting up my poetry. Please comment on it.
Poem Poetry racks my brain Haunts it But I need silence to write And the world is never quiet enough
Everyone surrounds me Like a Ferris wheel Gone haywire Stabs my mind
Their abilities Erase my feats Their looks Smudge mine
Why When I look in the mirror Does no reflection gaze back? Do you feel it too?
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Jul 25, 2005 3:50:42 GMT -5
Post by Ritsu Souma on Jul 25, 2005 3:50:42 GMT -5
Life Blink, blink Light, Dark Blink, blink Light, Dark Arms leaning on my shoulders Collapses with the weight Opening your mouth Without words falling out Pounding heart Paranoia Colors attack your eyes Worries flood your mind Too much to handle Sitting Sleeping No longer worrying Dead To the world Gain strength To pick up one leg Then another Other people Their own emotions Talking So many words Yes No How to put it Talking Moving your lips Ideas come as fast as they go Lost Forever Hatred Tears slyly run Dispatch them From your head They are no longer a part of you When they fall Externally Yet never internally Wonder Why are we here? Ponder Wasting time That could never return Cry at the thought Yet wasting more time. Falling Out of the world No one understands your mind How it works Not even you know Too many Way too many Yell Scream Help! No one understands the language That you speak Lost in your own mind Forever Again Forever
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Jul 25, 2005 3:51:27 GMT -5
Post by Ritsu Souma on Jul 25, 2005 3:51:27 GMT -5
My Life The clock ticks In my mind Knowing that time is limited Yet what to accomplish? I see you Happy Enjoying life Being the best Anyone could be I look at myself Not trying at all I want to be like you I want to find perfection I try not to care How or what they think I want to sleep at night Without worry I wonder I wait People stare At my difference Time stops For those who let it I want someone I want life I need a reason To live Is that just the point? Is life a toy, To play with however you want? Are walls meant to be broken, Or destroy people’s thoughts? And why do I feel so alone?
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Jul 25, 2005 7:40:24 GMT -5
Post by Kyou Souma on Jul 25, 2005 7:40:24 GMT -5
Those were beautiful Ritsu! Keep writing!
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Jul 26, 2005 2:33:36 GMT -5
Post by Ritsu Souma on Jul 26, 2005 2:33:36 GMT -5
Thank you!
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Jul 27, 2005 23:54:48 GMT -5
Post by Kagura Souma on Jul 27, 2005 23:54:48 GMT -5
Great job! Keep up the good work!
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